Well, when I say rushed, there's still a good few hours work in there! Although I think I understand what you're saying Dave, that's partly the point of the chapter - it's supposed to be a radical swing. I also had to find a way to get through a week's worth of battles in a few paragraphs, which is probably why it was a little confusing. Unfortunately I don't have the time to write Genesis totally... long hand, if you like, so you're going to need to fill in bits with your imagination. I thought it was fairly obvious where all the action was taking place though? Anyway, perhaps add comments up in the Genesis forum? This bit's supposed to be "pure" announcement, but thanks for the feedback.
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